awwwwww yea
that was pretty sick my friend! i wish i can vocalize what i hear in my head but i can't...sadly.
awwwwww yea
that was pretty sick my friend! i wish i can vocalize what i hear in my head but i can't...sadly.
Thank-you, brother! Haha well you're always welcome to give it a go, nonetheless :P
haha!
ok, ok, ok. so that was actually pretty good :D
the only thing that kept getting to me was , you already know, the quality of the mic. Your rap style reminds me of "cake" and i like it.
it reminds of when i was little and i'd be jammin. i'll definitely make a beat for you bro. i'm in this hardcore dub mode, but i think i know what'll sound good bro :D
Yee man thanks for the good words. I've just bought myself an SM58 mic and I'm working on getting a USB interface for it, along with my instruments. I'm trying to take this hobby a little more seriously. Really look forward to workin' with ya in the future.
haha =D
i like the melody, it makes me smile. i like it dude.
Glad you like it.
Hey
well i liked the intro untill the percussion came in.
keep it up.
thinks you can check out my stuff? just the more popular ones like, We play, A dream for Insomnia, and Julie.
you can listen to the melodies and just study it. like i said in the other review. not trying to brag or anything, just really trying to help.
ur stuff is good =] good job n keep it up!
music theory?
i just want to know if you know anything about music theory? serious question, because there is this one note that sounds out of key and does not sound so great. read up on key signatures and whats the difference between a major key and minor and the whole pattern between minor and major. if you get that down then none of your melodies will sound out of key if you know about keys.
keep it up.
yeh yeh i know music theory, i just messed this song up lol.
the "real" song is comming soon and the melody is completly changed and wayyy better lol.
thanks tho =]
hmmmm
i can say that all you have to do is work on your melodies. find popular songs amongst newgrounds and find why the melody is so attracting to the ear. study it. then experiment with your own style.
second, the percussion was distorted sounding.
i am just trying to let you know what was not so great.
keep on trying and you will, no doubt, become better!
good luck!
ive only been procuding music for a few weeks now =]
so a 8 for me is OMG YAY! =]
but sure, and thanks for the review.
it was pretty awesome
I really liked the intro. It was very abstract and noisy, in my terms meaning lots of noises. the only thing i raised an eyebrow to was the piano in the intro. I know the FL piano is pretty lame but there are a lot of free piano samples online that sound pretty good. Just sample up a storm and i'm sure there can be some good noises made with the samples. overall i liked it very much with the faint heart beat and all. nice. keep it up.
9/10
5/5
hm... that piano is actually a nexus preset, but thx anyways xD. I'll admit im not too good at getting my pianos too sound good, however personally I think it sounds fine
i thinks
you deserve to up at the top. bravo.
20 stars out of 10.
Thanks!
OH SNAP!!!
i loved it dude. it was great. well mixed and everything. but i have to say it sounds like it came from "fable" or something. maybe, maybe not. It was GREAT none the less. my type of sounds. keep it going!!!
Tnanks! You know whats funny is I started writing the notes for this right after playing alice for pc and fable 2, and I really wanted to get that fantasy sound....so I definatley had that vibe going, but it's all original! Cheers man!
okay
it could sound better, around "00:25" everything started to get blurred together. i couldn't tell which subject was which. and i don't know if you finished the song but the ending could use some work instead of dropping out after an intense build up. it sounds like you just wanted it to end so you did anything to end it.
actually that is all that there was to the song, sorry but i will try and add some more to it.
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